Comments on: Married Man – I’m Drunk http://www.mymorningstory.com/2009/10/married-man-im-drunk/ Write a story online Mon, 30 Jan 2012 01:45:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: craftymaynard http://www.mymorningstory.com/2009/10/married-man-im-drunk/comment-page-1/#comment-1028 craftymaynard Sun, 07 Mar 2010 18:55:39 +0000 http://www.mymorningstory.com/?p=1602#comment-1028 Here, here! Wine is only for the most experienced of alcoholics. I am a vodka man myself. Everyone must know their tolerances. Great drunk penquin! Here, here! Wine is only for the most experienced of alcoholics. I am a vodka man myself. Everyone must know their tolerances. Great drunk penquin!

]]> By: runningvein http://www.mymorningstory.com/2009/10/married-man-im-drunk/comment-page-1/#comment-464 runningvein Sat, 31 Oct 2009 18:46:25 +0000 http://www.mymorningstory.com/?p=1602#comment-464 Some pretty funny details in there. "... grapes hanging off a pergola ...", that was nice. That paragraph about his wife is hilarious. What a good wife ;) I think the only thing I have a problem with on this piece is that you need to stick to one tense. E.g.most of the story is in the past tense, but in some places it inexplicably switches to the present tense (e.g. paragraph about the wife). Was the policeman's name 'Jack'? Some pretty funny details in there. “… grapes hanging off a pergola …”, that was nice. That paragraph about his wife is hilarious. What a good wife ;)

I think the only thing I have a problem with on this piece is that you need to stick to one tense. E.g.most of the story is in the past tense, but in some places it inexplicably switches to the present tense (e.g. paragraph about the wife).

Was the policeman’s name ‘Jack’?

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