As the earth quakes.
And buildings shake.
We know many lives are at stake.
As people grasping in fear for every breath they take.
Many lives lost.
But at what cost.
Everybody running around in chaos.
Thousands of dead bodies covered in powder that looks like frost.
Help is on its way.
But hope it wont be too late.
Before more bodies rot and decay.
World,lets never stop 2 pray.
God please keep safe those who are dead.
And even those left behind whose tears are painfuly shed.
Please provide for those who still have not been fed.
As we know you are a God who provides,as in Your Word(bible),You have said.
World,lets come together and lend a strengthening hand.
Lets not be heartless and sit back just because they’re from another land.
So lets help in any way we can until they’re strong enough again to stand.
Lets not watch and allow their Island to dissapear and become part of their beache’s sand.
Haiti my heart goes out to you.
And this tragedy took all of us by suprise just out of the blue.
How you’ll ever recover from this,I dont think anyone has a clue.
But dont allow this to be Haiti’s fatal doom.
Cause Haiti,you will rise again and trust in God that that day will be someday soon.
God be with Haiti and all the lives lost in the earthquake.
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It kinda has some funky lines…”So lets help in any way we can until they’re strong enough again to stand.” stands out.
this is good, but i think the structure could be worked on, it has some rather distracting lines but overall good piece