Once again you have told an awesome story! I really like how you are able to communicate the thoughts of the main character well, in addition to the way you transition from each scene. I felt as if I completely understood Mark’s feelings, which almost made me repulse Shelly and Jerry along w/ his wife, yet I was excited by the events as they happened, and understood how an activity like swinging would be sought after by a married couple. BRAVO!
Once again you have told an awesome story! I really like how you are able to communicate the thoughts of the main character well, in addition to the way you transition from each scene. I felt as if I completely understood Mark’s feelings, which almost made me repulse Shelly and Jerry along w/ his wife, yet I was excited by the events as they happened, and understood how an activity like swinging would be sought after by a married couple. BRAVO!