pretty cool short. paragraph 4, sentence 3, i think the word “had” somehow got deleted in the conversion, or if it didnt, add it in and read it to yourself.
-Jimbo
I liked this a lot. Makes me want to streak around a windmill at dawn on a mild summer day. Sometimes it’s hard to get a full story out of a flash fiction piece, but you managed to do it, awesome job!
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pretty cool short. paragraph 4, sentence 3, i think the word “had” somehow got deleted in the conversion, or if it didnt, add it in and read it to yourself.
-Jimbo
I liked this a lot. Makes me want to streak around a windmill at dawn on a mild summer day. Sometimes it’s hard to get a full story out of a flash fiction piece, but you managed to do it, awesome job!