Comments for My Morning Story

Comment on Pricks and Pones by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Mon, 30 Jan 2012 01:45:08 +0000

Damn, that guy got his ass kicked for nothing! Great story, especially the dialogue and description of physical gestures.

Comment on The Best Parts of the Lime Pickle by runningvein

runningvein — Fri, 20 Jan 2012 19:24:47 +0000

Heh. Every story I post is a twofer. Double the value!

Comment on The 12 Days of Sexmas by runningvein

runningvein — Fri, 20 Jan 2012 19:21:17 +0000

Heh, funny.

Comment on If you guys dont read this and comment ill burn this place down by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 20:46:48 +0000

I’m obviously super late on this, but don’t blame me for the readability of your post!

Comment on Don’t like it? Don’t be an idiot by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 20:36:56 +0000

Lots of excellent points made here. I almost wish I had a serious problem with fanatics after reading this, just to say I was successfully rehabed!

Comment on The 12 Days of Sexmas by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Thu, 19 Jan 2012 20:34:47 +0000

Yes! Yes it should

Comment on sweat shop by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 14:54:56 +0000

I’m so in love with your writing! You have such an awesome way of painting pictures with words. May I do you in efforts to rub some of your genius off on myself?

Comment on The river by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 14:51:52 +0000

This was an awesome read, and I enjoyed recording the podcast for it. I like the surprise of identifying the blonde stocky young guy as a dog. This sort of personification shows how much animals aren’t really that different from us. A++!

Comment on What About Emilio? by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 13:12:10 +0000

What a great breakdown of two famous siblings. It’s amazing how much their paths have diverged, though one should never expect identical results when it comes to siblings.

I found this informative and entertaining. Kudos!

Comment on Writing Mistakes You Make and Don’t Even Know it–For Those Who Don’t Write by The self-examined pen

The self-examined pen — Sun, 15 Jan 2012 17:05:03 +0000

They weren’t put out there. I am honestly sorry about them as I did look over the piece.

Could I edit this, I’d ask you what they were so I could fix them on the site. I actually love it when people help me with mistakes like that.

Comment on The Best Parts of the Lime Pickle by James-Dean

James-Dean — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 15:58:22 +0000

shit, your profile got long. almost as long as your script. good either way. have a good one. -jimbo

Comment on The river by James-Dean

James-Dean — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 15:46:15 +0000

i just write cause i like it. which sentence fragment do you speak of? i dont have the time to dig through this. i gotta go to work soon. but if you could point it out for me id appreciate it. i try and remain typo free and grammatically correct. however i fail. lemme know. -jimbo