Comments for My Morning Story

Comment on admin by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Tue, 07 Sep 2010 00:09:29 +0000

Your double log ins hurts my brain.

Comment on I found out where my problem with commas stems. These days I do too much talking and less writing. Need to start writing more. by pasyr

pasyr — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 22:28:32 +0000

the more I read it the more I like it. good job

Comment on Hidden Prologue by runningvein

runningvein — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 21:51:33 +0000

I’m coming back from the B.S. Sandwich. Ahem, I mean Cochran. Oh dear, I seem to have misplaced a brain cell. Good work, author_girl_

Comment on 37 Bitter, Simple, Regretful Truths. by runningvein

runningvein — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 21:46:37 +0000

Not putting question marks or commas where they do not belong. I think you have a number #1 fan!

Comment on The Boozehound (Ode to Lindsay Lohan and E.A. Poe) by runningvein

runningvein — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 21:34:54 +0000

brilliant

Comment on A Moment In the Life by nickaplease

nickaplease — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 21:07:12 +0000

it wants me today is has the leverage, it wants to control me, maybe if i …..let it.

Comment on The Boozehound (Ode to Lindsay Lohan and E.A. Poe) by barea

barea — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 21:03:56 +0000

thank you for an intensely enjoyable read. : )

at a very few parts i think it could have benefited from a different rhyme scheme or an adjusted syllable, but thats your choice, and i like this anyways.

Comment on Shapeshifter by barea

barea — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 07:27:08 +0000

i like this, and the way you separated out different life/relationship stages. woo.

also, i was puzzled as to why you put the definition in there until the last line of it, at which point it made sense to me. but thats just me. you could have put it in there for a totally different reason.

Comment on 37 Bitter, Simple, Regretful Truths. by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 01:29:25 +0000

“28. Being proud and not asking for help.” seems to be one of my downfalls too. Sweet poem

Comment on A Moment In the Life by 80sBabi

80sBabi — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 01:27:45 +0000

The ending I don’t understand with the “Maybe if i I…”. I don’t see any foreshadowing of what may happen here. Is there a reason for that?

Comment on 37 Bitter, Simple, Regretful Truths. by nickaplease

nickaplease — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 00:49:17 +0000

the last one might read better as wondering why, but thats just me
cool poem though

Comment on You and Me by nickaplease

nickaplease — Mon, 06 Sep 2010 00:45:45 +0000

i write the best when i have something to write about,when im feeling something, i cant write stories really or any fiction, but this poem in particular was so easy to write that night it basically wrote itself.
thanks for your jealousy its makes me feel special. YAY